Bengali Payar is a form which lends itself to oral
presentation as it has two rhyming couplets within long lines which are halved
yet again .
There are two 8 syllable lines with an internal
structure of 4 and 4 beats, then a six syllable line with a 4 and 2 beat rhythm.
The six syllable lines rhyme with each other and
the last line is a finale. These are fun! The soaked flowers are Lily of the Nile or agapanthus, which follow hard on the heels of daffodils here on Lennard Island. I love their true blue colour and ability to withstand the vile weather of late!
Canadian Monsoon
Somebody wrote, Cruel April
breaking records, hot cold
rolling thunder, lightning strikes too
floods
strand poor cows, mud mould...
But wait one day, or week or month
April snickers, you’ll see
patience rewards, remember this
don’t
plant too soon, think like a bee.
Very complicated poem scheme! Very good description of April!
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